tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1223853978166645441.post2050097559476082847..comments2012-05-02T20:36:40.894-07:00Comments on Mahshad: StainsMahshad's Bloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11928943541746915519noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1223853978166645441.post-66706453141487455132012-05-02T20:36:40.894-07:002012-05-02T20:36:40.894-07:00Thank you! I like writing poems that are not only ...Thank you! I like writing poems that are not only about myself but it can relate to others. Most writers make poems about themselves and people can understand what they feel while they hide their own emotions. I like making poems that can relate in both ways so they can think "oh this completely is me" and they can relate to it and help themselves fix the situation or if they feel bad about something that happened and they tried their best to fix that its okay its their choice. :)Mahshad's Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11928943541746915519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1223853978166645441.post-50697848342254848112012-05-01T21:38:41.343-07:002012-05-01T21:38:41.343-07:00Very nice throughout Mahshad. You have a nice way...Very nice throughout Mahshad. You have a nice way of writing poems that seem very personal, but I think many people may find the feeling universal.<br /><br />The sixth line should be "too." <br /><br />Nice poem.Mr. Gaunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08642242935180157560noreply@blogger.com